Lots of great lines in here. The lyrical text wrap of cascading “only…/lonely…” in the second poem was quite impactful. I felt like I was slipping down a steep ridge, and each attempt for better footing made me slip faster.
Really loved the conclusion to the end of the first poem too.
Lots of great lines in here. The lyrical text wrap of cascading “only…/lonely…” in the second poem was quite impactful. I felt like I was slipping down a steep ridge, and each attempt for better footing made me slip faster.
Really loved the conclusion to the end of the first poem too.