a candy-colored morning on today of all days life made a shape that although geometrically improbable was true soft-edges tucked between this architecture of napes huddled and memory of swan swan on a dock sea lazily lapping barely awake and the sun
Lovely and heartwarming. I love the “swan swan” and the lack of punctuation made me play with its emphasis in the poem, but I didn’t even consider it as a visual at first. The molecular “sunlight” concept is new to me. I’m not sure I’m familiar with the reacting science you’re referencing here? But I think I’m picking up on the high level as to how we react to sun and physical touch on a molecular level.
Lovely and heartwarming. I love the “swan swan” and the lack of punctuation made me play with its emphasis in the poem, but I didn’t even consider it as a visual at first. The molecular “sunlight” concept is new to me. I’m not sure I’m familiar with the reacting science you’re referencing here? But I think I’m picking up on the high level as to how we react to sun and physical touch on a molecular level.