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Mark R.'s avatar

Lovely and heartwarming. I love the “swan swan” and the lack of punctuation made me play with its emphasis in the poem, but I didn’t even consider it as a visual at first. The molecular “sunlight” concept is new to me. I’m not sure I’m familiar with the reacting science you’re referencing here? But I think I’m picking up on the high level as to how we react to sun and physical touch on a molecular level.

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Mason Pashia's avatar

Thank you! Yeah I think it's mostly just this extension of a quantum idea that things only exist in relationship but also things have to exist in order to relate - just one of those endless paradox questions. we'll chat about it further sometime :)

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