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Reading this one after the most recent poem, I enjoyed the mirrored parallel from “Parthenon…”, where the narrator seeks thinning oxygen in this poem, while the other seeks oxygen.

Loved the little images of coziness, and I’m always a sucker for any half-reference to “forgive them for they know not what they do” as I feel like it’s one of the most painfully human sentiments in the Bible. Not sure if this was intended, but it’s always where my mind goes

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